Wow! All that introspection makes me want to cry. You did such a good job of capturing their emotions. I can totally see how this is how each person would be acting and reacting when it happened. The part with Keith at the end just encapsulates it. Love it a lot.
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Date: Thursday, August 21st, 2008 08:56 pm (UTC)You did such a good job of capturing their emotions. I can totally see how this is how each person would be acting and reacting when it happened.
The part with Keith at the end just encapsulates it. Love it a lot.